Feedback - September 16th

Some very competent work posted and you are working hard to meet deadlines. Comments to improve refer to layout of posts and detail and use of media terms. You need to ensure print based texts are adapted for the web using bullet points, images etc. Chessie especially - some of your posts are lacking in detail and use of media terms. Make sure you are very analytical and develop ideas to obtain a level four planning. Great start you two, exciting ideas for track which need posting.