Group: Audience Research - Rough Cut

 

 

Feedback:

• We have a nice panning shot, however it does  get shaky at some points and so we could do with using AfterEffects to make it much more smooth.
• At time the light levels changed.
• The mise-en-scene used is good and fits the style of the track.
• Some of the shots are too long, and so need cutting.
• There is a nice use of distance variety, e.g. a mix of long shots and close ups.
• Some of the performance needs editing as it either is not a necessary part or it does not look like the character is actually singing.
• The part of the pan in which only the piano can be seen needs to be cut as it is not needed and is out of place.
• The canted angle is in the wrong place, too long and supposedly too extreme for use within the video.